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Hey,
I want you.

Just once,
that's all it would take.
Note me.

1.21am 18.12.2009

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SRSmith Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010   Writer
I'll bet hearts were bursting into flame all over the globe by 1:22am.
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megsmad Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
hahahaha if they did no one told me about it!
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:iconsrsmith:
SRSmith Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010   Writer
Well, it's hard to speak when your heart's burst into flame!
[fortunately I deprive mine of oxygen, so it just aches ;-)]
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megsmad Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2010
:hug: hahaha you're clever!
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balgroggy Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Total and utter truth is a raw cold thing that burns. Just once and the whole thing changes.
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megsmad Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010
depends on how said persons react
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balgroggy Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is also true.
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Manlarr Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009   Photographer
Direct and beautiful. I love to read you work. :D
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megsmad Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009
i love that you love to read my work :hug:

thank you
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Manlarr Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009   Photographer
You write with a direct sense of you. (if that made sense)
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megsmad Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009
i think so...

maybe it's because everything i write is based off my truth and not just my imagination.
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Manlarr Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009   Photographer
The best work come from deep inner truth. Writing like this is hard. It takes baring your soul. Most cannot dig this deep and still share it.
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megsmad Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009
:hug:
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scottjamesprebble Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2009
Once.

Would be lovely.
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megsmad Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2009
:)
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SoBo113 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
The frustrating thing is that one time is enough to get hooked on
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megsmad Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
too true
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
Once upon a time?
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megsmad Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
hmm?
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
Just once, you said.

A joking suggestion hat the speaker in the poem might be fantasising.
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megsmad Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
ah.
you're spot on by the way.
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
:heart:
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megsmad Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
:)
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hokeywolfe Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009
Just totally *AWESOME*! :nod:

You are so good at this. I smile every time I read one of these micro essays. :flowerpot:
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megsmad Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009
lol, thanks john
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ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009
:hug:
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megsmad Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009
:hug:
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